Fate Intro
-Heart is what drives us an determines our fate. -Isabel Allende
- Heart is what drives us and determines our fate. The heart is like a car, it drives you to your fate, or destination. Agree, the sentence above tells that your heart determines your fate \. This can be clearly seen in a book called Homeless Bird. In the book Homeless Book, it talks about how this girl got married, then her husband died three days later after the wedding. Later she found her true husband, her true mate. Fate, doesn't always deal with love, it can mean many other things as well. This all concludes to your heart.
I really like your paragraph, you did good on not putting I. you could of put more of your thesis.
ReplyDeleteHey Sujey! I like the way you described fate in the end. You told us about your book too, which is a good way to tell the readers what your book is like, and why it has to do with fate. At the beginning, you need to address who the author is and use quotes. You would also want to put "This quote is true because..." instead of "Agree, the sentence...." You also need to underline the title of your book.You state that this girl lost her husband, but that is your only point, you need three clear points in order to have three body paragraphs.
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